Pitch Video and evaluation

This is a video of me and my group presenting our pitch to the whole class and also includes audience feedback in it. We got asked several questions on our pitch, we tried our best to answer them to a suitable standard. The audience liked the track which was crucial as if the audience did not like the track, there would be problems as no one would want to watch our track so this was a good advantage. I feel that we lacked in planning and this was a huge disadvantage as we could not get our ideas across sufficiently like we wanted and this caused confusion for the audience, to improve/ compensate for this, me and my group will be making another treatment in which it will address all the confusion in this video and also be in detail to ensure that our planning is up to scratch. Also, we will have another female actor involved, which is what was raised in this video, we still haven't picked an extra female actor but we are in the process of doing so. I liked the idea that was suggested, the idea of the couple being in the distance while the lip syncher is lip synching so the audience gets a view of the whole situation in one place, this is something we will definitely think about taking on board. We definitely need to develop our whole concept and this will be done so in our new treatment. Overall, I would say that the audience feedback was helpful as it will help in improving our music video. Audience feedback is vital as it helps with knowing the opinions of others and making sure you meet their requirements as an audience.